Writing Numbers

by Christophoros Demetriou
25th February 2012

Ok, here is something I was wondering about, writing numbers in a story.

I remember once I saw somewhere it was best to actually write the numbers, as in one, two, three etc as oppose to 1, 2, 3.

I decided to do that with my story as well, but the problem is, at some point of my story there are a lot of numbers mentioned continuously.

When I read those chapters, I always feel it is tiring to have to read the numbers again and again. To make matters worst, the numbers are in the thousands.

So I keep getting whole paragraphs saying things like

“One thousand five hundred and seventy four for John, one thousand seven hundred and thirty eight for Bob…” and so on. This happens a lot, and as I said I feel and looks wrong, and it will definitely tire the reader out.

Is it wrong to write them using numerals? Or is it just a matter of choice, preference and practicality?

I know you shouldn’t write “room 1 needs tea,” but can’t I say “John’s car hit 300 miles per hour before it crashed?”

Actually, now that I mentioned it, miles per hour, can’t I also shorten that to mp/h? or km/h if am talking about kilometres?

What do you think? Have you ever had a similar problem? What do you do?

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I've always done it if the number is under 10 then type it out in full; if it is 10 or above then use the numbers except if it is getting spoken.

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Christina Howland
28/02/2012

Your use of numbers depends very much on the context of your story, and numbers often tell a lot in a story.

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Your use of numbers depends very much on the context of your story, and numbers often tell a lot in a story.

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