Who decides what you write?

13th December 2010
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8th December 2020

You decide what you write. No-one else. You’re certain of that, right?

nicola

First off, let me introduce myself. As the newly appointed Writers & Artists editorial manager, over the last decade I’ve come at book publishing from many vantage points – the buying side as Amazon fiction editor, slushpile reader, commissioning ed, writer and writing coach. This has given me a view on many facets of the publishing industry but, at the end of the day, I have always worked for one client: the reader. As a writer, you must make certain demands of yourself: the key one being to actively engage with your reader. Do you deign to amuse your reader/audience? Romance them? Shock them? Change them? Make them think? Make them feel?

All that said, who decided how I began this blog? In a way, you did. Sure, I decided its content but its direction was guided by my take on your needs. Firstly, you’re not going to be bothered with what I have to say unless I can back it up in some way. Secondly, according to this medium (online), I only have so long to grab your interest, so I’m going to have to be provocative (or at the very least intriguing). Did my intro achieve all that? Then all good. Now, if you’re still with me, let’s get down to the nitty gritty of who you write for and why.

Our time – the public’s, the individual’s - has never been so precious. The novel isn’t dying. But if it wants to live on with us, those whose business it is to advance it must not forget nor forsake their first obligation: connecting to the reader. The reader wants guarantees that if they go on the journey with this writer that they’re getting what it says on the package. And not because they are lazy or want to be spoon fed – how crass to dismiss an entire audience wholesale – but because we’re at a stage in our evolution where we need to ‘manage’ the flow of information. Now we can either help our readers or fold our arms, stare down disdainfully and say well, that’s not my job.

But today that is your business as a writer. Daily, people go away from enough experiences disconnected. Whatever you’re writing – be it a harlequin romance, a factual history, a literary work of staggering genius – you want to have affected someone when they turn that final page.

Before you even get to your end reader though, there is the minefield that is family, friends, acquaintances, social peers, fellow professionals, your very culture. The voices in your head. Would mum really want to read that? Shouldn’t your colleagues hear exactly what you think? And would so-and-so think more or less of you for courting an inflammatory opinion?

And even when you manage – if you ever do – to suppress/ignore/come to terms with those voices, a whole new chorus goes up: The Writer’s Group. How much sway do they hold? How much is constructive, fair comment? And where do you draw the line?

Then, after crossing the immense terrain that is completing a novel, along comes an official who says that actually there’s a whole other level of border control to go through – a whole cavalcade of readers you have to get past before you brush noses with your final audience. Now you can resent this, circumvent it (Self-publishing route) or roll up your sleeves and see it as fresh challenge to test your writing prowess at wooing a whole other type of reader.

For it’s all about connecting to your target audience, be that your agent (those first 3 chapters, that synopsis), an editor (that full-length manuscript, personal connection), the marketing department (Why will this book sell better than any of its competitors? Will you sell?) and, ultimately, your reader. By all means write your synopsis for the gatekeepers, refine your first three chapters, but never write your entire book for them.

So at the end of the day I declare who decides what you write is you and your chosen reader/audience in concert. You are trying to persuade them of something/to come along for the ride/to hear you out. No, you can’t please all of the people all of the time. But in the business of publishing, it’s a necessary idea to at least please one person other than yourself/a family member/someone you paid. Because if you can connect to one other human being, then potentially we (your publisher) can connect you to your widest possible audience, duplicating that intimate experience for hundreds/thousands/millions of readers.

Yes, ultimately, you have the power but please let it be on behalf of, or at least in response to, a defined reader. Otherwise, is that a novel you’re writing or prose with sensory impact?

So my question is twofold: At this point in time, who is deciding what you write? And who do you write for and why?

Signing Off,

Nicola

Writing stage

Comments

Dear Nicola,

I’ve just survived several nights of sub-zero centigrade arctic weather and though I have been unable to stay comfortably still for long; I did manage to sit long enough to read your kind introduction. On behalf of fellow members and myself, I would like to extend you a warm welcome to Writers’ and Artists’.

It has been nearly a year since I joined W&A. In that time I have learned many important things about the literary profession. But the greatest thing learned by far has come with personal hands on experience of composing pieces of work; book chapters, poetry, even simple blog comments.

From the beginning, I strived to serve the needs of readers. Yet I also understood not everyone could be satisfied. For every person who finds my work appealing, another will disregard it; and for reasons that may have nothing to do with the writing itself. They may not like my perspectives, character or appearance.

I realized writers could gain as much acclaim as possible by expansion to different styles and genres, but ultimately have to reach a moment of contentment; a time when they understand the balance between pleasurable writing and pleasing everybody. From this balance, pleasureful literary achievements are born. Arduous as it is, accomplishing such work is my pleasure, part of what I write for.

May your time with us be delightful, with many future happy memories.

Xean

12/16/2010

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16/12/2010

Hi Nicola

I'll look forward to it.

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15/12/2010

Hello Nicola,

Thank you for your advice, luckily with the graphical description I have written, are only based on ways, such as killing, how the sound makes you react and the detail of the act, as I'm witting horror its mainly about monsters. (Like Clive Barker or James Herbert)

Your advice has helped a lot and I'm currently proof reading my work to make sure of what is crossing the line, and for it not to be an onslaught, like you say I want it to be more about the story instead of a barrage of detail in crossed boundaries .

Thanks again,

Kind regards,

Richard

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