Do you REALLY want to write like Jane Austen???

by Wilhelmina Lyre
17th August 2016

I've just read a comment by Jimmy at https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/question/view/2618 and was reminded of an e-mail that I received not long ago. It said something like: "[Do you] Want to write like Jane Austen?" Or maybe "How to write like Jane Austen". I suppose that it was offering places on a writers' workshop / seminar / whatever, and came from either "The Writers' Workshop" or "Writers & Artists". I've been looking through my e-mail inbox and can't find it, so I guess that I must have binned it. Or maybe there never was such an e-mail and dementia is advancing on me. Can any of you confirm [seeing something like this] (and rescue my sanity)?

Anyway, Jimmy's comment ('According to Jane Austen, the correct form was "Do not you think" ') has spurred me to answer this question "Want to write like Jane Austen?" with a resounding "Certainly NOT!" *

Not only do I not want to write "Do not you think", I ALSO don't want to write novels where the #1 obsession is "Is she going to catch him in the end?" NOR novels where none of the main characters seem to work for a living (OK, OK: an exaggeration, but there ARE a lot of idle rich swanning about with nothing better to do than going for outings in carriages) while the working class hardly puts in an appearance. (And a low income disqualifies them from love.)

Or have I been reading the wrong Jane Austen books?

* Not even the fact that Pride and Prejudice is by far the most down-loaded book of the Gutenberg Project's list sways me. (16,690 down-loads compared with the much-more-deserving #2, Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, at 10,183) [See http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/search/?sort_order=downloads] (Sherlock Holmes comes in 3rd, and a piece of erotica victoriana 4th. That's the only one I downloaded. [I've already got Alice in printed form.]) Of course, you have to remember that all the books on their list are copyright-free.

Actually, P&P is one of Austen's that I haven't read. (Perhaps the only one?) But I promised myself that if I was a good girl and behaved myself, I wouldn't have to. Even if it's free.

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Yes, Lorraine, but why would anybody in the 21st century offer a workshop on writing like JA? And why would anybody shell out good money to attend it? Unless they want to write historical novels. And, as Wilhelmina has pointed out, those can be had for free from the Gutenberg Project.

Of course, if you want to write a historical novel where the female characters have backbones made of something more consistent tnan blancmange, and other ambitions than to marry the squire's son*, then all power to you.

But, in that case, you won't be writing like JA.

* I myself write reworkings of classic fairy tales where female characters have a bit more gumption than in the originals. (See http://jimmsfairytales.com). These could also be considered period pieces (no iAndroids, no Pokemon Go, etc.!!!)

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Why would you want to write like JA, particularly if you're not writing historical novels? 'Do not you think' comes from French grammar - and I remember learning that many aristocratic families spoke French at home until the 18th century. (No idea why I know that, or the source.)

JA was writing in the 19th century, not the 21st; she wrote of the people around her and the society she knew. You're obviously not writing Regency Romance, so none of this applies.

I studied Persuasion for A level many years ago, and still prefer it to P&P: less frothy, perhaps, and the characters more deeply considered.

You need to write the way you want your books to sound: that's all there is to it.

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