Hi all, I have amended the first three paragraphs so far of my story 'Never Forgotten' and was wondering if you could tell me what you think. I have uploaded a before and after so you can see where I have made the changes. Thank you in advance :)
Hi all, I have amended the first three paragraphs so far of my story 'Never Forgotten' and was wondering if you could tell me what you think. I have uploaded a before and after so you can see where I have made the changes. Thank you in advance :)
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