The Phoenix Legion

by Zohaib Ahmed
22nd January 2012

Guys at last i have posted my work, i am still afraid to do so but did it, 2 paragraphs from the beginning

if you guys can give it a go, i will post more for reviews

and adding more, i have written half of my novel, need some advises

thanks :)

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Thanks Emma, so nice of you to read it :)

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Zohaib Ahmed
23/01/2012

Hi Zohaib,

I've read it and left a comment for you. Hope its helpful.

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