Please check my shared work

by David Castanho
26th April 2014

Hi everyone,

I have copied over a little sample of a scene in chapter 4 of my book in progress; The Heavenly sequence. I was hoping that people could check out the style of the writting for me and tell me what you think. Dont worry to much about the details of the setting and things as the previouse chapters has covered all that. Please do take a look, Thank you :)

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