May I say a big thank you to the people who gave an honest and helpful critique on the first part of chapter one. I have learned a few things from this. I write as I speak and am told I tend to talk rubbish so you get the idea! It is so often the small things that help the bigger picture and this has sorted more than one of those things that I have been unsure of so once more thank you. trouble is I have to go back and start changing the bits that need the attention. hey ho. My thanks. I will in the next couple of days, once I have sorted out what needs changing post the second half of chapter one.
Again thank you for your constructive help.
Regards Paul.
Replies