21:04; He was devastated. The party was absolutely a nightmare. He wouldn't want the night to rewind. He needed an escape. An so, he left. To find what others called an escape of life. He needed it at the moment. He was begging for it. No one heard him. He needed it that bad and so he left. To find an escape.
21:09; She was an escape to him. But she, she wanted to escape him. He was he worst nightmare, that she wouldn't want to appear again in her sleeps. Thus, she left. Broken and bruised. Finding a medicine to a broken heart is not as easy as finding the medicines to a broken body. She was scared. But, she is finally free. Being able to smile to the fullest is an escape.
Hi Wan,
This piece is punchy. I like the short sentence structure, something that's hard to pull off, but it gives your writing a real bite.