'Abbreviation',,A Poetic Appreciation

by neelam gaur
27th December 2018

                           'Abbreviation

 

                   When I was in discussion

                   about my last narration

                   it was so exciting to describe

                   first two lines

                   where she was in a rose garden

                   & between blossoms of marigold

                   plucking flowers

                   suddenly got hurt by a hidden spine,

                   for two moments, I laughed

                   on thinking about middle lines

                    in that I wrote

                    where she was trying to solve a puzzle

                    by jointing lines to lines

                    & dots to dots,so suddenly affraid

                    of saw an ultimate image

                    its a horrible robot,

                     I was silent

                    with describing in symbolic language

                    in that she was assume like a living character

                    appreciating my whole narrationev

                    as thanking me for described her

                    in poetic words

                    by awarding a memorable title

                    in abbreviation.

 

                                                     Neelam G

 

                                                               

 

                 

 

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