Anne

by Eleanor Knowles
3rd May 2018

100 word stories are fun... have a go! Here's one of mine.

 

 Anne

 I had an affair with a married man. Nothing unusual there. We held back as long as we could, making do with glances, touches, letters.

 

I was pregnant when we exchanged rings, his first wife wasn’t cast aside without a fight. But it couldn’t last, a man marrying his mistress creates a vacancy.

People look away as I climb the steps. Their whispering swells and ebbs like the sea.

A glint of sunshine flashes along the sword blade. I hope it’s sharp enough.

As my head falls I will have the last laugh. My daughter Elizabeth will rule an empire.

 

Comments

Thank you Elsie and Libby for your comments, I was thrilled you liked the 100 word stories. Sorry about delay in replying, mislaid my login details...! Well, I'm just posting more, hope you enjoy. Love the idea of a 10 word story, very difficult though - please post some.

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Eleanor Knowles
08/08/2018

Love it. Am going to have a go at 100 word challenge. I also do 10 word challenges. Friends/family send 10 random words and I have to put them together into a piece of writing, blind, one at a time! I think exercises like this keep you in your toes. Please post more!

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Elizabeth Justice
04/05/2018

Hi Eleanor. Loved it! Really clever and a good story in 100 words. Well done. Elsie

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