Annabelle spencer was looking to spend her Christmas alone after a bad breakup from her handsome, rich, successful ,lawyer boyfriend Rich Bagwell. She thought he was going to propose during Christmas. when they had plan to go spend Christmas with his parents, but the plans changed when she caught him with his secretary in his office. Now she need time to recover from his betrayal. She remembered when she was little spending time with her family at the family farm and remember looking up at the stars and pictured her self dancing with the man of her dream under them and drinking hot chocolate at Christmas under the stars.
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I take it this is a synopsis. Timely for Christmas. But I think the use or non-use of uppercase and punctuation is too eccentric. I would drop "a' before Christmas; perhaps replace it with "her". 'When "he plan"?? In his secretary office?? I wish you weren't in such a hurry to publish.