Coitus ohm

by Sum Nemo
21st August 2017

 

Under constant attack, pressure builds

Myocardium snaps setting on fear

Adrenal medulla pumps and pumps

So plantar fascia can dare to run

Travelling through veins then muscles

Setting in hyperarousal

Central nervous system crashes

For a moment then it lashes

It has a choice it makes it count

Flee is not an option now

Adapting to the confrontation

Damage may cause altercation

Sixtieth of a minute passes

Sudden as it came it crashes

No more riddled with acute stress

Centre organ beats again

Slower than it did before

Slower still and then no more

From dry retina we regain

Last image before end came

Female, pheomelanin, lipochrome

Cause of death a coitus ohm.

Comments

Love the flow, also how each line is relevant.

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