At any ordinary day,we were out shopping in town,there were many crowded places;because of course it was Christmas Eve. Me and my family had to do some Christmas shopping at last minute,of course our family always does things at last minute like...going to a wedding and taking too long to get dressed,but anyways that does not matter. ''Jake,come on I know you don't like photo's but this is a Christmas Family Photo!,you've got to be in this'', mum exclaimed. At that moment she pointed towards a camera man and then said.''If I don't see you there in less than 5 minutes then you will see the consequences!''. It wont be that bad will it? So I decided to go and complete the family photo.'' Smile Jake,come on get into the festive spirit,It's Christmas!''. Suddenly there was a terrible flash,when I looked around I noticed my family weren't around me,What was I to do?!? TO BE CONTINUED...
Thank You Guys!, it means a lot upon hearing your helpful comments and me rectifying them
Once Again thanks for taking one ounce of your time to write the comments
Ishpreet.
You could also have a look at books that are comparable to the one you want to write.
It could give you some ideas about how to write, how to describe places and objects, and proper grammar.
By asking questions like "How did my favorite author introduce some of his/her characters" you could get some good ideas. (Obviously don't copy, that's not cool. Use it to inspire you)
Perhaps this helps, perhaps it doesn't.
Either way, have an awesome day!
Thanks for the comment Lorraine!
I'll try to make sure next time that I don't get past tense mixed up...
-Ishpreet-