'Empty Baskets'...Memories in poetic lines'

by neelam gaur
11th February 2020

          'Empty Baskets'

 

           Empty baskets

            are filling with roses

           its fragrace all around

           entering in all noses,

           after keeps aside those

           Nancy came to window

           how surprising it?

           what she was watching

           that water of nearest dam

            was being overflow,

            it was a great morning

            of rest house

            that she will never forget

             enjoyed with her spouse.

 

                                                Neelam G

         

Comments

you suggest, how it will get it to fill it's blank space?

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24/02/2020

yeah.......may be like it.

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11/02/2020

Thanks for compliment about title,it is representing title in both ways literal & metaphorical depends on readers view & thoughts .

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