If i showed you my teardrops,would
you collect them like rain,
Store them in jars,that are labelled
with “PAIN”,
Would you follow their tracks, from
my eyes down to my cheeks,
As these tears write all those stories,
i m too scared to speak,
Would you stop them from kisses,
bring their flow to a halt,
As you teach me that pain, isn’t
always my fault ,
Would you hold my face gently, as
you dry both my eyes, and whisper
the words, ” you are too precious to
cry”.
If i showed u my tear drops, would
you show me your own, and learn
though we are lonely and far, we are
never alone……
Just beautiful - I love it.
As LSJ says, very delicate and beautifully put. Very good that it is quite short - that adds to the emotion.
Two small points:- Firstly; should it not be 'Stop them with kisses' not 'from kisses'? Secondly; as previously suggested, the final stanza might benefit from a tweak, as there seem to be just too many words for it to quite scan properly. You could try as above or;
'If I showed you my teardrops, would you show me your own?
And though lonely and far, we are never alone.'
If you want to keep the word 'learn' in there, the final line could be 'Though lonely and far, learn we're never alone.'
Well done and keep writing.