Part One: The Sunset

by Sylwia Nowak
25th January 2016

(...) The soldier fall on the ground and blood kept spreading. She did not want to look at him, so she turned around, threw her sword away and she was just about to collapse, when someone grabbed her from the back - Are you ok?! - (He) held her very firmly like being afraid she is going to fall on the ground. - I just killed him, I just killed him...- the tears starting to come out from her eyes... - I was going to unarm him, I was aiming his sword, not him! But it didn't work I killed him! - As she was crying more and more, (He) suddenly kissed her forehead and said - I can't watch you crying - (She) was very shocked and froze for a moment. She had never expected him to behave like that. - What did you just... - I just made you stop crying, didn't I? - he smiled. -The fight is over now, no enemy will enter this castle ever again, I promise.-He touched her cheek and looked deeply into her teary eyes. - I will never let anyone hurt you.(...)

S.D.N.

Comments

Hmmmm. This is powerful and romantic

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