A beautiful police detective named Diane, who has a pessimistic view on relationships, but hopefully in search of romance, met an intriguing lady with a secret agenda, and cruel intentions. While befriending to entrap Diane into heartbreak, misery and disappointments, the mystery lady did not count on the venomous bite Diane possesses. Being a lady on a path to seek only companions to fulfill her illustrious sexual appetite, Diane always seem to be left broken hearted in every turn she makes.
Agree with Pablo - more would be good to enable a better understanding of your work.
Hi Soji
Do you have any short pieces of this work that you could post up? It sounds a little different and darker than the run of the mill romance, and I should like to taste it please. That way everyone could post suggestions regarding development, et-cetera.
Cheers
PabloJ