A Time to let go

by Barbara McClenaghan
7th June 2012

Pams voice echoed with excitement, "come on Liz,its a long drive," with a snap in her voice Liz replied, "oh goodness sake, i'm coming, i'm coming," with their bags in the car they were off. "well no turning back now Liz," said Pam with a cheeky grin."i do know that," replied Liz sarcastically.

Each hour that pasted excitement filled their bodies, "what do you think well find there Liz?" Pam asked her heart racing. Liz turned slightly towards Pam and without blinking she snapped the words out as if firing blades, "i don't know do i, but it better be worth my time," and with that she slammed her foot down on the accelerator.

They hadn't been driving long when Pam asked Liz to pull; Liz reached over to pam and grabbed hold of her leg, "we are on a bloody motoway and theres no stopping allowed not for two miles," Pam started to aggravate Liz by whisling, she kept it up untill they reached the service station. "what are you a six year old," Pam had wanted to stop because she had had a bad feeling about going any futher

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Hi Kathleen thank you for your comments dated 17 Feb 2013 .This isn't the full story as I was writing it for Nanowrimo at the time and I managed 50,000 words in 28 days. But due to family commitments it was just put away.

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