Tiny Tim was playing one day
Until something he noticed turned everything grey
My height is a bother I hate being so short
But bigger kids laugh and it's not even my fault
I'm not tall like daddy and I'm smaller than mum
I'm short like the finger that’s next to my thumb
I can't reach the high shelves where all the sweet things may be
I just ask my mum nicely who then reaches for me
I wish I could do things that big people do
Like go on my own to the park and the zoo
I wish I could stand up when bullies make fun of my height
I'd scare them away with an awful big fright
But I'm just so tiny it just isn't fair
So he sat all alone and was feeling despair
With his heart filled with sadness and his spirit down low
He went to his mother to tell tales of his woe
She listened carefully face filled with concern
Her son had a gift and it was time that he learnt
So she softened her voice and breath warm with care
Then whispered something so sweet in his ear
Don't worry Tiny Tim this won't be for long
Every day you keep growing so won't you hold on?
Being short isn't a bad thing I want you to see
One day you'll be big like daddy and me
So when bigger kids laugh and point out that you're small
I want you to stand up you're not tiny at all
You have the biggest smile with a big heart to match
You're kind to others you don't hit them or snatch
You follow the rules like big people too
You use all you're manners you're not spiteful or rude
So when you feel down because you're shorter than most
Remember that being tall is not something to boast
Tiny Tim you're big in all ways but one
But you're perfect to me and I love you my son
Hi.
This is a really sweet poem. I can imagine it as a picture book to read aloud to pre-schoolers.
I think you could further improve it. There are a few lines which are a bit too long and could have a few words omitted to make it sound right when said out loud, for instance, by omitting the words in brackets below:
I can't reach the (high) shelves where (all) the sweet things may be
Hope that was helpful