Visions

by Melissa Ward
18th June 2014

The sounds of the clanks,

The waves of a river.

These things come to mind when i think of the past.

Pointless journeys to a world of pain.

I think of what will happen when i get there,

Guessing how fate will hurt me next.

As i look out the window,

My eyes follow a lone bird flying towards its freedom.

How i wish to be that bird,

To fly into the clouds,

Majestically flutter high above reality to make my own fantasy.

Comments

thank you and well if im honest that was a grammar error haha :) but im glad you enjoyed my work

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Melissa Ward
25/06/2014

Lovely piece of work, Melissa. Only one question from me - why do you use a lower case 'i' when referring to yourself?

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