When I lay down
In grass so golden and brown
I could never wear a frown
Even if I get ticks in my hair
It will be nice to have them there.
( There will be a little illustration to go with this )
When I lay down
In grass so golden and brown
I could never wear a frown
Even if I get ticks in my hair
It will be nice to have them there.
( There will be a little illustration to go with this )
Hi there Liz,
This is short and sweet, and I like the idea of having an illustration to go with it. Something I noticed while reading, though, was the change in tense - the first three lines are in past tense, whereas the penultimate line is either present or future, and the final line future. This can easily be remedied without changing the number of syllables in each line, however :-)