Who decides what you write?

13th December 2010
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8th December 2020

You decide what you write. No-one else. You’re certain of that, right?

nicola

First off, let me introduce myself. As the newly appointed Writers & Artists editorial manager, over the last decade I’ve come at book publishing from many vantage points – the buying side as Amazon fiction editor, slushpile reader, commissioning ed, writer and writing coach. This has given me a view on many facets of the publishing industry but, at the end of the day, I have always worked for one client: the reader. As a writer, you must make certain demands of yourself: the key one being to actively engage with your reader. Do you deign to amuse your reader/audience? Romance them? Shock them? Change them? Make them think? Make them feel?

All that said, who decided how I began this blog? In a way, you did. Sure, I decided its content but its direction was guided by my take on your needs. Firstly, you’re not going to be bothered with what I have to say unless I can back it up in some way. Secondly, according to this medium (online), I only have so long to grab your interest, so I’m going to have to be provocative (or at the very least intriguing). Did my intro achieve all that? Then all good. Now, if you’re still with me, let’s get down to the nitty gritty of who you write for and why.

Our time – the public’s, the individual’s - has never been so precious. The novel isn’t dying. But if it wants to live on with us, those whose business it is to advance it must not forget nor forsake their first obligation: connecting to the reader. The reader wants guarantees that if they go on the journey with this writer that they’re getting what it says on the package. And not because they are lazy or want to be spoon fed – how crass to dismiss an entire audience wholesale – but because we’re at a stage in our evolution where we need to ‘manage’ the flow of information. Now we can either help our readers or fold our arms, stare down disdainfully and say well, that’s not my job.

But today that is your business as a writer. Daily, people go away from enough experiences disconnected. Whatever you’re writing – be it a harlequin romance, a factual history, a literary work of staggering genius – you want to have affected someone when they turn that final page.

Before you even get to your end reader though, there is the minefield that is family, friends, acquaintances, social peers, fellow professionals, your very culture. The voices in your head. Would mum really want to read that? Shouldn’t your colleagues hear exactly what you think? And would so-and-so think more or less of you for courting an inflammatory opinion?

And even when you manage – if you ever do – to suppress/ignore/come to terms with those voices, a whole new chorus goes up: The Writer’s Group. How much sway do they hold? How much is constructive, fair comment? And where do you draw the line?

Then, after crossing the immense terrain that is completing a novel, along comes an official who says that actually there’s a whole other level of border control to go through – a whole cavalcade of readers you have to get past before you brush noses with your final audience. Now you can resent this, circumvent it (Self-publishing route) or roll up your sleeves and see it as fresh challenge to test your writing prowess at wooing a whole other type of reader.

For it’s all about connecting to your target audience, be that your agent (those first 3 chapters, that synopsis), an editor (that full-length manuscript, personal connection), the marketing department (Why will this book sell better than any of its competitors? Will you sell?) and, ultimately, your reader. By all means write your synopsis for the gatekeepers, refine your first three chapters, but never write your entire book for them.

So at the end of the day I declare who decides what you write is you and your chosen reader/audience in concert. You are trying to persuade them of something/to come along for the ride/to hear you out. No, you can’t please all of the people all of the time. But in the business of publishing, it’s a necessary idea to at least please one person other than yourself/a family member/someone you paid. Because if you can connect to one other human being, then potentially we (your publisher) can connect you to your widest possible audience, duplicating that intimate experience for hundreds/thousands/millions of readers.

Yes, ultimately, you have the power but please let it be on behalf of, or at least in response to, a defined reader. Otherwise, is that a novel you’re writing or prose with sensory impact?

So my question is twofold: At this point in time, who is deciding what you write? And who do you write for and why?

Signing Off,

Nicola

Writing stage

Comments

Hello Nicola,

I liked your article and seized on it, as I have a specific query that I think you may be able to advise me with. I am editing a new printed magazine for a local writers group and one story has polarised members views and caused two people to resign already . This is over the use of strong language. I tried to be diplomatic and suggested we print a short rider, warning the reader that the item will contain strong language. however I am now seen as the devil incarnate for even suggesting a compromise on this thorny subject. I don't like bad language but wondered if there is any written guidance on the subject that would get me off the hook and smooth ruffled feathers. After all shouldn't a writers group be also a thinking group and be able to shed a little light on thorny subjects. From what I can gather this problem has always been swept under the carpet. The author under attack insists that in losing the members vote, we had just banned him as well as D.H.Lawrence.

I would like to see this subject out in the open and debated fully. As a society we do hear more profanity, especially from American media. Do you have any clear guidance on this query?

Best regards

Harry Riley

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Hello, everybody. Glad to meet a 40-year old first-time writer. I'm a 50-year old one myself. Well, like yourself, I've been writing for years, but have only recently completed my first book. I sent it to a select few agents, and I've had no luck so far. Maybe some writers need as much help writing a one- or two-page synopsis as a whole novel. And maybe it's something else! The family and friends bit is interesting. My wife was so underwhelmed with the bit she read that I didn't show it to anybody else at home, and I didn't leave it lying around for her to finish. I think she had a different idea entirely of what it would be like. And maybe it's something else! As for who you're writing for; I actually wrote it for one of my young children, who gave me the idea in the first place. I thought he might develop it himself some time, maybe in an essay at school, or something, but, after a while, he seemed to have forgotten about it, so I decided to write down at least the gist of what he'd said to me. Then, it kind of went from there, if it's not too grand of me to say so. Currently, I'm writing for myself. I think that's the first connection I have to make. Bye for now. Tom Deegan.

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Hi Nicola, I've just recently joined W&A and your article encourages me to continue with my life long desire to write. I have been writing for a long time but not until now, 40, have I had the insight, life experience and confidence to pursue it seriously. I write for the reader hoping that they too will enjoy, be engaged by, make a connection, be inspired with my characters or stories. I would like some advice: I sometimes find my characters saying or doing things that aren't true to who they are. So I erase and re write the scene certain that my readers will find a lack of integrity with my character(s). Am I doing the right thing by re-writing? How important is this not only to the readers but also editors and agents? At the moment I am waiting for family and friends to give their critique of my book, that is if they ever finish it! I've heard that having family and friends read it first is a good step before sending it in to a professional. Is it? Thanks for the article and any advice.

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