Bad Poetry?

by Tshegofatso Tshite
27th February 2014

Hi Everyone,

I've posted my second poem now and have had no response save one!

I would really appreciate some feedback because I just write, I follow no rules because I've never studied them. The school I went to unfortunately did not offer English Literature which I'd have loved to study.

So....is it that bad?

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Posted my feedback.... Good Luck!! :)

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Neeraj V Murali
28/02/2014

Hi Guys,

Well.. I thank you for your motivating comments. James it should appear on writer's shared works...I think. Do tell me what you think when you find it.

I guess I'll teach myself how to professionally break the poetry rules then.

Thanks much.

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Tshegofatso Tshite
28/02/2014

Not necessarily! I don't read any poetry on here as it's not my thing at all. I'm sure there are quite a few people like that!

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