Hello - new member of the community here. I'm in the process of completing an historical fictional novel and have posted a chapter that introduces one of the main characters. If anyone has the time to view it and comment on the character and her setting I would be very grateful.
Hi Jean, welcome to W&A.
I've left some comments which I hope are useful. Bear in mind that they are my personal viewpoint, and other people's may differ.
Lorraine
Hi, Jean!
Welcome to the forum! I saw your comment on Theresa-Mary's StrangerInAStrangeLand entry. You seem like someone who might want to submit to the project yourself. So: http://la-granota.com/stranger.htm
BTW, your shared work can be found at https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/jean-cooper-moran/work/5893a529387140fc338b4569
I hope that this helps Alice.
Hello Alice, I would be very pleased if you have time to read the chapter. Other writers' views are highly valued. You will find it posted in "Writers' shared works" section on the website and if you cannot access it do let me know and we can find another way.
Jean