Character Dialog

by Mykie Hall
15th December 2013

I have a very peculiar sub-character with a distinct Jamaican patois accent who has very little dialog but is key to the plot.

Is it right or wrong to deliberately misspell certain words to put this across?

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note just an idea: (I agree with advise given). If you do have a decent amount of dialogue for this character perhaps using correct spelling but miss out connecting words out to imply the accent.

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Denis Taylor
15/12/2013

Absolutely put misspellings in, but make sure it is a small amount of dialogue. Because it's hard work to read people do get fed up with it quite quickly.

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15/12/2013

Personally I'd mis-spell. Little dialogue means little chance of a reader becoming bored with it. I did t with a Cornish gravedigger late on in one of my stories and no-one's criticised it yet, so I hope it worked okay.

It's one more reason to avoid rubbish spell-checkers, too :)

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