I'm obsessed with writing but I think it can be improved (to be honest, I like to improve my writing and it makes me feel good and gives me confidence). My question is how can you introduce or set up a solid character? Could anyone give me a set way to build up the character? Like the air they carry, hair, eyes, skin colour.
Usually I give a very brief description of the character's appearance and then let their actions, attitude and behavior do the talking for me. If they need a more detailed description than a few lines, I will drop it in throughout the chapter so that within a scene or so you can imagine what they look like.
I will also occasionally write up a one or two page fact sheet about them. This will include basic information like their age, where they are from, eye colour, hair colour, height, gender, whether or not they use magic, their preferred weapon of choice (wand, staff, sword, etc), family ties, etc.
As the character develops in the story, I may add key events and traits to their bio, but most of my characterisation comes as I write rather than being planned out in advance.
Thanks for your contribution. It helps a lot whatever it is :)
How much would you give as well to the introduction of a character? Is there an acceptable length? Two sentences or a short paragraph of, say, five or six lines?
This probably isn't a very helpful answer, but I don't really think about it that much. Then again, I hardly plan at all.
I think if you're introducing a main character it is very important to think about their entrance - but don't go over the top on description because it gets too wordy and your reader gets bored. The best thing about reading is to let your own mind do some of the imagining, and when the author describes everything down to the littlest detail it feels more like an essay that a book. Saying that, you still need to describe the character properly and fully. I think what I'm trying to say is it's important to find the right balance. For example, paint and shade the canvas but don't paint a black outline. Let the colours blur and smudge.
I personally like dramatic or ambiguous introductions for important characters. Something that you really remember that character for - first impressions are lasting impressions. If your character is dreamy or romantic, try and say it without actually saying it. Actions speak louder than words. You also need to treat your character like a real person and keep it realistic.
And never underestimate the intelligence of your reader. They're likely to pick up on what you are trying to convey. Hope this helps!