Comments welcomed

Hi, all - as a recent joiner to the site, I'm still feeling my way around, as they say, but figured I ought to try out the sharing system. I've added a (very) short tale in my Shared area, which is open for anyone and everyone to cast their peepers over and, if you feel like it, to add a comment or two. Sadly, as I work full-time and am a single Dad, I won't be able to get on here as often as I'd like, but I do try and make myself available over lunchtimes, so will happily pick up any tips, pointers and comments then.

Thanks for reading!

Steve...