a constructive critic to my work?

by Asuntha Adams
3rd February 2014

So here's what I plan on doing:

I found out that sharing my stuff here is like a great moral boost, and I get good feed back from you guys. I mean, it's just 2 days since I put up one of my old works, yet I've got 3 comments already!!

I'm asking you guys, if you're good at critics, can you do mine?

https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/asuntha-adams/work

(the link)

Coz, because of the inspiration, I might even consider working on this! like, try make it better, sorta.

I'm planning on changing my work to another old one when I've got enough feedback.

To all you guys who read: THANK YOU!!!!

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