Dialogue?

by Adam Turner
28th March 2012

I have read in various places that a huge percentage of novels should be made up of dialogue, but don't really know how to get it in there right. I don't want them to go off track and start bleating random thoughts or descriptions of the setting. But I want my story to be very dialogue based, supplying the reader with the information they need, without the characters acting in a way that they wouldn't in real life. Any help? Thanks!

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I had the same idea. I have written a few lines and then to listen to the recording will writing and making the necessary corrections. I'll take some more time to see the results ..

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Luis Bento
29/03/2012

My novel was originally made to up of too much diaglouge, so I balanced it out with more description. I agree with Victoria that it needs to be a decent balance. It is really difficult to find the right balance sometimes, I try to just go with the flow. Because the trilogy I am currently writing is based in the first person it is very easy to just go and voice the characters immediate thoughts and emotions rather than observe what is around her.

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Lily Dooner
29/03/2012

I never use dialogue as a means of conveying large chunks of information or for explanations of things - it's unbelievably tedious to read. The Da Vinci Code does this a great deal and is one of the (many many many) things wrong with the book! Dialogue to me is a natural progression of the narration - I never think: oops, too much prose, gotta do some talking now. The one bleeds into the other. As for the quantity, it depends on the book. There are no rules. Use your instinct.

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