Dogs of War

by Mark J Braybrook
1st August 2014

Hi Everybody, I'm going to submit my short story Dogs of War to a competition and wondered if anyone had any more constructive feedback on it. You have given me great feedback previously and helped me to improve it tremendously, and I now want to give it the optimum chance of sucess. Any further assistance would be greatly appreciated.

Many thanks

Mark

Replies

Absolutely stunned, its the most compelling gripping story ever.

I was hooked from the moment. But I do wonder what happened next?

I would also like to know which publication accept this kind of short stories?

Your writing was not complicated and it was easy to follow the story - did not need the dictionary at all to decipher.

Well done!

Profile picture for user dentling_24079
Carmelita
Dentlinger
330 points
Developing your craft
Film, Music, Theatre, TV and Radio
Short stories
Fiction
Speculative Fiction
Adventure
Romance
Carmelita Dentlinger
04/08/2014

Hi Carmelita, it is in the Writers' Shared Work section. It's on the popular posts section, second one in. Many thanks, Mark

Profile picture for user markjbra_21449
Mark J
Braybrook
3005 points
Developing your craft
Film, Music, Theatre, TV and Radio
Short stories
Fiction
Crime, Mystery, Thriller
Adventure
Autobiography, Biography and Memoir
Business, Management and Education
Middle Grade (Children's)
Picture Books (Children's)
Comic
Speculative Fiction
Popular science, Social science, Medical Science
Practical and Self-Help
Historical
Gothic and Horror
Philosophy and Religion
Romance
Mark J Braybrook
02/08/2014

Hi Mark, where is your story?

Profile picture for user dentling_24079
Carmelita
Dentlinger
330 points
Developing your craft
Film, Music, Theatre, TV and Radio
Short stories
Fiction
Speculative Fiction
Adventure
Romance
Carmelita Dentlinger
02/08/2014