[asking on Q&As for people to “please have a look at my shared work”.]
Of course, I’d be happy for you to comment on ANY of my works. But I’ve just uploaded “Proposed e-mail to literary agents (please advise)” – https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/jimmy-hollis-i-dickson/work/57ee51c8387140e75b8b4569 – and that’s what I’d most like your comments on now. This means YOU, Lorraine! (Among others, though I could live without Kevin Phillips’ comments.)
For the first time in my life, I now have my own working credit card. So I’m going to pay for a year of on-line WAYB (https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/listings )… and get onto those agents again! I just don’t want to shoot myself in the foot… so please comment.
Hi Jimmy, I have left a comment also, I have recommended something I have recommended to others quite a few times, sorry i'm repeating myself but like a decent radish I think it is worth it. Paul.
Responded as requested.
Lorraine