Feedback?

by Clare Williams
7th December 2016

Hi everyone. I know Q&A isn't technically the place to ask for feedback on shared works, but I know some people don't always look at shared works.

I've posted the opening to my new novel on there if anyone has the time or the inclination to have a look. It's approx 1000 words, it's called Glass - and despite starting out as a romance, it's now a thriller.

Thanks in advance :)

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Thanks Denis

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Clare Williams
11/12/2016

Hi Clare,

Many thanks for posting your chapter. I've emailed my detailed comments. Hope you find them useful.

Best wishes.

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