Hi everyone
I have posted my prologue and part of my first chapter in shared works and was hoping for some feedback as I've changed it quite a bit by removing a lot of the backstory. I've also added a prologue which casts some doubt on the protagonist. I'm not sure if it works, and whether I've made it worse rather than improving it - think I need to take a step back for a while! Anyways - any feedback would be much appreciated. I'm happy to have a look at anything of yours in return.
Thanks in advance
Actually, it IS Jummy... You've discovered my secret identity!
Jimmy! Not Jummy :)
Thanks Jummy. Both my before and after are on my shared works.