Hi everyone.
I've posted the first 2 chapters of my new MS on shared works if anyone has the time or the inclination to take a look. I've posted the first chapter before but have changed it now, in particular from 1st to 3rd person POV. Would appreciate anyone's feedback/ comments.
It's a thriller and it's approx 1500 words.
Many thanks in advance.
Clare
Hi Clare! How are you?
Are you looking for a general comment on this piece or a full read and peer review? I've left you a comment.
Thanks :)