Hello all, been a while since I have been on the site and I come back as a first time Granddad, Anyway, enough of my boasting. I have posted the first page in the shared works. I know we are not supposed to post here as well and direct people but... I am trying to learn how to better edit my own work, so I have given it a go on just the first page and would appreciate your comments of which is better, also am I getting the hang of editing or do I need much more practice.
Thanking you in anticipation as I have always had excellent feedback in the past.
Regards Paul
Paul, congratulations Grandad.
I'll take a look at your work and leave constructive comments.
Congratulations on your first grand-baby Granddad.