I've posted my first bit of shared work. (it's far more scary then I thought!) please could somebody, anybody have a look. I'd appreciate any comments or thoughts that could help. Thanks!
I've posted my first bit of shared work. (it's far more scary then I thought!) please could somebody, anybody have a look. I'd appreciate any comments or thoughts that could help. Thanks!
Hey, keep posting your history! I appreciated your narrative style. The girl's impotence under the doctor It's like a no return river, that keeps pulling you down and down into troublesome events. I Loved it (what isn't surprising as I'm a fantasy/terror/mystery writer).