Hi All,
I have just posted a fragment of a piece I am working on and need lots of help!
Please crit honestly I can take it! I struggled with dialogue so feed back in this department would be really appreciated. I am trying to write in a mid England dialect hence the strange words. Does it work or make the reader confused?
Any assistance would be great not sure where the story is going just got it into my head and had to write.
Many thanks
Anne
Oops sorry I removed it by mistake. Will repost thanks would appreciate feedback.
Where is your fragment Anne?