I'm currently writing a fantasy novel, about Dragon Riders in our world, a sort of Urban Fantasy+ Urban Sci-Fi mix with multiple themes etc. So uh..the thing is-I've just posted an excerpt from the second chapter of my 1st Fantasy Novel in this planned series of 5, Albert Flare. So, I would be really kind of you to help out and give a li'l feedback and your opinion too, if you can. A strong critique is very much appreciated, though I value the critique about the content over the grammar, as that's always an easy fix.
I'd be happy to return the favor as well, you need only ask. :)
I will do it by tomorrow... At a first glance, it looks nice... :D