This may sound like a flippant question but it isn't

by Paul Garside
13th March 2018

Hello all, this may sound silly but these days everyone (especially tv adds) say "for free" The reason I ask is, have I had it wrong all my life that if something is free, then we say "this is free" and not this is for free. Otherwise we we would need a bag of "frees" Or did my parents and teachers guide me incorrectly. The other question is, do I now have to write: "Get your hands off of me" or can I still write "get your hands off me"?

I ask because I think I know but am no longer sure. If I am writing then I need to get as much correct as I can. There are more things like this but it would become a list and I think these are the two main ones that bug me.

Or is it just Americanisms? and if this is the case do I have to learn the way they use English.

I hope that makes sense to anyone who reads this post.

Thanks in advance. Regards Paul G

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Get your hands off me is still the norm, I think.

Regarding Orwell's rules, I agree strongly with rule 1, not so much rule 2 and 3. You should use long words and padding words if they enhance the rhythm and beauty of your sentences.

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20/03/2018

Hi, Paul.

I hope Orwell's rules for writing are of help to you.

George Orwell’s 6 rules for writing

1. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.

2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.

3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.

4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.

5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.

6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything barbarous.

I hope that helps.

Good luck.

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Couldn't agree more. I hate the dreaded 'grocer's apostrophe'. I don't know about you, but one of my pet hates is that we're losing nouns and verbs. We have horrible phrases like 'there's a disconnect' and one I heard three times in one interview: 'We're thinking of relocationing.'

Having said that, I'm writing a novel, and I started by choosing how each character would talk. I wrote lists of words and expressions that each might uniquely use.' You could have some fun doing that. But unless I want to characterise someone, I absolutely refuse to use 'like' as an adverb. I still can't stand people saying 'it looks like it's going to rain.' (I suppose I should have (or should it be should of?) put Eats Shoots and Leaves as my favourite book--well it is one of them.

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