This is yet another try at getting a new post up.
Thank you to those who looked at what should have been a comparison of the first page of my novel, I was hoping that I would get an opinion as to whether the editing I had done on the page was better as a read then the other. Unfortunately all that was posted was not even the full first page of one that should have been there for comparison. It wasn't for a critique of the content but to see if the edited version of the page was "tighter" and was it easier to read. There is a lot more about who said what and the POV of the driver but that is in other pages. I didn't know the amount or words that could be posted is so few.
Thank you anyway for the time you took. I appreciate you taking the time and effort but I didn't get what I was after because of the fact it wasn't there for comparison.
This is the third attempt at posting this each time I have tried it has disappeared hope this one is posted.
Paul
Thank you Elsie, I couldn't find the comparison I am glad you did I will go and take a look later I have to dash out now and again thank you
Regards Paul
Hi Paul,
We've taken a look at this and can't recreate the issue you're experiencing. Could you email W&A Admin on writersandartists@bloomsbury.com with a bit more information so we can make sure the web developers are aware of everything they need to know?
You should have noticed that there's now a reCAPTCHA process you need to complete before posting anything. And to confirm, the maximum word limit for a post is 3,000 words.
All best
W&A Admin
Hi Paul. I read the short comparison pieces you posted and did comment that I found the second one easier and that it flowed better than the first. Don't know if you got the reply on your post but here it is if you didn't. The post only had a few lines, should there have been more?