Please can someone read my story and add comments

by katherine swain
10th February 2013

Hi, i am new to the writing world and have been writing short stories, I have put my first story -for what its worth -in the shared works part of the site. I'd really appreciate it if someone could read it and give me some comments and feedback as its my first time writing and id love to strat entering competitions.

Please beware, its a little bit of adult comedy!!

Thanks, Kat.

PS , ill be pleased to read yours back!!

Replies

Hi Jennifer...thank you so much for reading it and its great to get someone else s perspective!! i really appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed it!

Funny where life takes you! I never thought I would start writing , but I have and really enjoy it!

Ill keep my eyes peeled for any of your stuff!

kat:)

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katherine swain
11/02/2013

I was very happy to read your story, it made for great reading, I'm also new to the writing world and this website! I hope you find my comments constructive enough. As for entering competitions, there's no time like the present...

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