I have rewrote chapter 1 in my book, so could you please leave comments at the bottom for feed back inmy shared work ? i'm a portuguese author.
I have rewrote chapter 1 in my book, so could you please leave comments at the bottom for feed back inmy shared work ? i'm a portuguese author.
Nice one! Good flow of thoughts, well connected and a thumbs up from me!! Though some lines were a bit, sort of weird, but maybe it is probably my mood.. xD!
Good Luck!
Neeraj