I have uploaded a re-drafted copy of my story 'What He Doesn't Know Can't Hurt Me' I'd appreciate if people could read and let me know if the amendments and additional parts are working well for the effect I want. Thank you in advance :)
I have uploaded a re-drafted copy of my story 'What He Doesn't Know Can't Hurt Me' I'd appreciate if people could read and let me know if the amendments and additional parts are working well for the effect I want. Thank you in advance :)
Thank you both! I have replied to your comments :)
I've had another look and added some more feedback.
done ;)