Request for feedback

Hi,

Its been a while since I visited this site, or did any writing of note, however, I'm feeling inspired again and want to get back into finishing my novel.

I'd like some feedback please, its a children's fantasy novel, and I've uploaded the first chapter to this site: https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/anthony-glenn/work/5ecfd57e387140e45e8b4569

Thanks in advance!

Anthony