Shared first chapter, what do you all think?

by A.L Star
16th June 2013

http://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/antoinette-adams/work What do you think of the first chapter?

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Hi Antoinette, I have been trying to read your work but can't find it, have I missed something. I followed your link but it took me to your profile but not the chapter. I would like to read it. Regards Paul.

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