Shared Work- Albert Flare Chapter-1, please comment

by Ritesh Nimmagadda
15th June 2013

I have now uploaded my first work's first chapter, the first draft of it, for the first time. I have worked hard, on this piece, hope you all like it. It's fantasy, with magic and dragons and, (well you get the idea). Please provide feedback.

Thanks in Advance

Ritesh

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Thanks for taking the time to post. Was an interesting read

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Michael Anstead
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