I've posted a short story below & would love feedback. Does it seem complete or should it be expanded? Do you have an understanding of who/what Bert is? Does it make sense? Anything you can comment on would be appreciated.
I've posted a short story below & would love feedback. Does it seem complete or should it be expanded? Do you have an understanding of who/what Bert is? Does it make sense? Anything you can comment on would be appreciated.
Nice story susan
Neeraj
Hi Susan,
I read your story yesterday and I think it's great. The only reason I haven't commented is that I haven't had time! Today's a bit manic too (deadline), but I hope to log in tomorrow, so please don't delete it yet!
Best,
Fliss