Should I straw?

by Tiago Silva
10th July 2014

At the very beginning of the story, normally, the first chapter there's more descriptions than character talk.

Well, I start with the protagonists talking about the core of the book. (Do you understand? :p )

Should I... you know... put some straw there, or just leave it like that?

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OK thank you Jonathan! :-)

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Tiago Silva
12/07/2014

I'd say it depends on the story. We're all (well, most of us) rooted in the present day. If your story's historical or sci-fi you need to ground the reader in that period as soon as you can.

But like Kate said you don't want to overdo it. Straw is a good analogy because it's both a waste product, if you're a cereal farmer, or a useful forage/bedding if you keep animals. Only thing is, if you're the latter it soon becomes a waste product again.

So you want a little clean straw at the beginning and a thicker bed as you progress, but make sure you muck out the big lumps of dirty stuff when you edit.

Best of luck :)

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12/07/2014

Thank you too carla. You're right. I might as well read that book just for safety :)

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