Hi all. Does anyone else out there begin reading a novel only to realize that you're noticing all the 'flaws' (for want of a better word) in the writing? I began one last night and after two pages I noticed that nearly all the story was 'tell not show.' I found it a bit difficult to carry on because of what I've learned about putting a story together. I kept thinking 'this isn't what I've been taught.' Once this has been seen does anyone else read on but still find themselves picking up the 'flaws?'
Hi Adrian. I completely understand what you are saying and I've actually put the book in the 'charity shop' pile. Will be choosing better written novels in future by better know authors. Thanks.
Hi, Elsie.
I have banged on, and banged on in the past about what books a would-be author should read to hone their writing skills.
Would-be authors should read widely, but more importantly, they should soak themselves in books of their chosen genre. You will learn more by reading novels by acclaimed, award-winning novelists. Deconstruct their novels to see how they do it.
There are many prestigious writing awards. Two of my favourites for children's literature are, the Carnegie Medal in the UK, which is awarded by a panel of highly-qualified Librarians, and the Newbery Medal in the USA, which is given by the Association for Library Service to Children, a division of the American Library Association. Reading the winners and finalists of both those Medals throughout the years, has been gold in my pocket.
Learn from critically acclaimed authors novels rather than authors of poorly-written, or trashy best-sellers.
My motto - 'Learn From The Best'.
Thanks Jonathan and Adrian. You might be right about things changing and maybe nothing is 'wrong' anymore. It is a very good read but I can't get past the amount of telling and not showing there is. If it was being narrated I could understand it more, narrative has to be told. But it isn't. I'll carry on reading it, if I can, and learn from it. Now I see clearly what the meaning of 'show not tell' is all about. Thanks again.