I just thought that we should have some fun.
So I'll start.
The boy wearing shabby clothes stood fixated. Staring longingly at the candy that lay on the table before him.
I just thought that we should have some fun.
So I'll start.
The boy wearing shabby clothes stood fixated. Staring longingly at the candy that lay on the table before him.
...The boy looked over his shoulder and saw a woman standing over him. She was thin, and looked just as hungry as he did.
Her vice like grip on his arm belied her frail appearance...
They are both good
His mouth watered as he looked at it. He'd barely had anything to eat for days, the very idea of food brought a wave of immense hunger. His gut hurt, longing for food. If only he could take it. He reached his weak and dirty arm, only for it to be held back tightly by another.
I believe this is better? Sorry, I think I have perfection OCD or something of the sort. :P